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Rescue

Anonymous

Poetry
Treading cold water, fighting
Against the undertow. Weary
Head barely above the waves, Clinging
Feebly to frail flotsam, struggling
Alone in a sea of pain.
Temptation to let go, to surrender
To submerge, submit to the relentless voice
Of the current calling.
To drift with it, follow its course.
Float away on an analestic tide.
The shore now an unreachable memory, Lost.
Controlling ocean, let it envelop you,
Cloak you in cold yet comforting water
Numbing the pain, the guilt
A quiet end to the struggle.

Yet when a voice in the mist, cries out
A face fades into focus.
Comforting eyes connect
With yours in an embrace
Of mutual comprehension.
Relief washes over, it runs through the veins
Grasping the heart, the immense
revelation. No longer alone
In a solitary cell.
Mist lifting, unlocked by sunbeams dissolving
The cloud, The dawning
Of realisation – there are many here in the water
Strugglers, survivors. Clutch each other, share
Body heat, stay living, holding out
waiting for the lifeboat, or
Swim as one being of common empathy.
Encouraging words drown the roar
Of the Ocean and the current’s sweet voice.
Freed from the shackles of isolation
The solace found in understanding
Guides us to the shore.

I wanted to express the power of shared understanding between two people suffering from similar ailments – be they mental, physical illness, grief or any state of suffering. I have had a number of experiences where I have seen and personally felt the immense relief when two or more people share an understanding of a feeling, situation or illness.

Illness can be very isolating. In my work i have tried to portray the overwhelming relief felt – the revelation, that comes when someone who previously felt that they were suffering alone realizes that there are others who feel, or have felt the same. It is a huge relief and I think a very therapeutic experience. I think that it highlights the value of peer support in therapy and holistic care – in all types of chronic illness. For me it also emphasizes the importance of empathy in practitioners.

I wrote the poem as a ‘stream of consciousness’ – it has barely any editing. The images all came into my mind while I was thinking about my experiences. I tried to turn it into a rhythmic, rhyming poem but this felt too contrived. As it stands, this poem is more a raw collection of thoughts – I enjoyed the creative process and found the writing therapeutic in itself.

Whole Person Care – Year One